Sunday, July 23, 2017

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2 comments:

sally said...


hey i may have written that poem!

i did remove a long-winded comment from communitas dies
only to replace it with a more succinct one

believe me
you didn't miss anything worth reading

jh said...

well
still
I think the phrase is profound
the idea that a thought is removed
must be at least as interesting
as one that isn't
I mean { why? } comes into question
does it not

the haiku captures the
multivalent character
of the words and the setting





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